Care to read this beginning to my novel? *tell me what you think*?

I love it! :D It could use some grammar work, though. Some of the sentences end with a period when they should be ended with a question mark. Another thing you have to watch out for is telling too much detail. Show what you want through dialogue and movements the characters make. I saw a few instances where that can benefit you. I wish you the best of luck in your novel. Keep me posted? :D